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Want to see my editing process?
Sophie and I were going through my fic, getting everything ready to finally get posted. As usual, some extra stuff got added in to round out a few scenes. This is what happens when we add new lines:
After a few minutes of wibbling, that became:
But that sucks, so we changed it again.
There. That's better.
“That explains so much!” he said.
Loki laughed along with him, something something about Fandral making the trip not completely shit. MAYBE THERE WOULD BE BUTTSEX.
After a few minutes of wibbling, that became:
“That explains so much!” he said.
Loki laughed along with him, knowing at least that with Fandral along on the hunt, he wouldn’t be completely bored. At least if they were lucky, there would be the opportunity for al fresco dining. Which here mean LOKI DOING GAY STUFF. WOOOOOOOOOOOOO.
But that sucks, so we changed it again.
“That explains so much!” he said.
Loki laughed along with him, knowing at least that with Fandral along on the hunt, he wouldn’t be completely bored. At least if they were lucky, there would be the opportunity to sneak away for a clandestine meeting or two.
There. That's better.